Why would you make her skin so much lighter? You totally whitewashed her. This is disgraceful and all you're doing is perpetuating the Eurocentric beauty standards that are harmful to society. Her skin tone was fine the way it was before.
being asian i think there are not enough asian models in magazines, haha, so it would be easy to associate beautiful with being non-asian. but this touchup is shows that you can be any race--the makeup and how the flaw is a part of the look.